Zusammenfassung der Ressource
Feedback on how to improve
the film
- Shorten the opening title credits
- The length of them at the
moment is boring
- convey the narrative by
rearranging the footage
- It will be clear as it'll show the reason
behind why that is happening
- Think of the pace of the narrative
- If conversation is being used it should
be heard, therefore the music should
be quieter at that point