Our first attempt didn't go to plan as we didn't acquire enough footage to make the 2 minutes, it also wasn't completed with a HD camera as we didn't have access to one at the time, therefore the quality of the film wasn't good and the visual of it was crackling meaning it wasn't clear. Also the title sequence doesn't match our genre, as it makes it seem as if it will be a sci-fi but it is in actual fact a murder mystery. There is also no build up to character one finding the body of his roommate so no suspense has been created which is the main idea that is needed for a mystery film, especially a murder mystery. The black and white filter that was used throughout doesn't compliment the film, therefore making the actual image of the film seem unfocused.

	Created by Hannah Morris almost 11 years ago

evaluation

Evaluation of Attempt One