Which revision correctly expresses the meaning of this sentence?
In the souvenir shop, they found some excellent examples of wood carvings.
In the souvenir shop were found some excellent examples of wood carvings by them.
They found wood carvings and some excellent examples in the souvenir shop.
Some excellent examples of wood carvings were found by them in the souvenir shop.
Which sentence is the best revision for the sentence above?
At this point in time in English class, we are reading several biographies of prominent people until the semester is over.
In English class, we will be reading several biographies of prominent, famous people until the end of the semester.
Until the end of the semester in English class, we will be reading several biographies about the lives of famous people.
Presently, in English class, we are reading several biographies of famous people until such time that the semester is over.
Which sentence should be revised to make the style and tone of the paragraph consistent?
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6. Which sentence should be revised to make the style and tone of the paragraph consistent?
7.Which revision of the last sentence best matches the style and tone of the rest of the paragraph?
During the final game, the umpires made many super bogus calls against our team.
During the final game, all indications pointed to the umpires being totally in over their heads.
During the final game, the umpires made questionable calls in favor of the other team.
During the final game, everyone made comments about how unfair the umpires were.
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