Father aged 30 remarried
Nean 17 year old half-french,
half-chinese
2 step siblings
childhood
Supersition
Curse - if a
mother dies in
child birth but
child survives, the
child is bad luck
on the family
discriminated by family
step mother
divided family
Upper class- stepmum,
father and their two
children
second class-
Adeline and four
other siblings
Nean favored
those who went
along with her
wishes, disliked
others
Nean loathed
Adeline as she was
strong and
independant
Nean also despised
"aunty baba" older sister
of the father as
unmarried and
dependant on adleine's
father
half-sister Susan (only
daughter of Nean)
disowned as beautiful
and intelligent and
Nean was jealous
school
sent to a convent
boarding school
as she didn't follow nean's wishes
at age 10 elected class president
her friends wanted to celebrate
she knew she could not take them to her house
she ran home upset
her maid told her, that her friends were downstairs waiting for her
she knew nean would punish her, so went down stairs
Nean asked to speak with her, told to leave door opem
told her to send her friends home, slapped her and Adeline got a nose bleed
at 14 dad told her to
get a job as Nean
believed education
was wasted on her
humiliation
college
Adeline won an International play -
writing competition, father was proud
so allowed Adeline to come to England
and study medicine at university
After she had graduated she
went back to Hong Kong to make
her father proud, however she
hated it there again.
America
applied for a job in hospital in Philidelphia
moved to America
met her husband Bob
none of her family at wedding
Nean wanted to disown her
her father chose to keep her
Paragraph one
"Time"
indirect personification
time is not human, so
it turns it into having
human feelings
"relentlessly"
- human feelings
emotive word attached to time
lending it a human
asscoiation =
personification
line two
threshold, turning point.
ske know something is
ging to happen
Paragraph two
"outside it was hot
and there was a
warm wind blowing"
pathetic fallacy
the use of weather
conditions to reflect
human feeling or mood
mix of short and
long sentences
"like a persistent toothache"
similie
"throwing dice"
fate
"The radio warned of a possible typhoon"
prophesysing
paragraph seven
"foreboding"
negative anticipation, a
sense that something ill
is going to occur
elaborating the following
"I" because of comma
brings attention
"Nightmare"
compressed (style)
"wondering who had died this time"
associating being
summoned to a bad
occurance
"everyone was healthy"
relief, tension eased
paragraph eighteen
"Ruse"
scheme, plot, trick, the
word has mildly negative
connotations - she doesn't trust him
1st two lines - character
"Timidly"
scared of entering
"i breathed a small sigh of relief"
she is is scared of him
"dare i let my guard down"
confusion, father seen as
enemy, tension building
paragraph four
"Mother Valentino"
house mistress, keeper. shows she is
important/ intimidating
Paragraph six
"Hurry up downstairs!"
IMPERATIVE
"!" EFFECTIVE
sharp tone
a sense of urgency,
authority, impatience
testy impatient
paragraph nine
"How should i know"
"I" in itlaics
not as respectful as to an adult
paragraph eight
comfortable with him
in a peremptory manor
paragraph twelve
"replied rudely"
testy response
(not very close with parents
as out of touch, doesn't even
know where they live.)
paragraph seventeen
"Holy of Holies"
fathers office, Jerusalam,
inner sancutm, shows how
people don't go there unless
there is something special
Paragraph nineteen
short sentences,
minimalist, not chatty
paragraph twenty one
"conossian school"
nuns, strict, joyless
paragraph twenty two
"is it possible?
rhetorical question
kudos- stamp of approval
short but brings attention
to her thoughts
paragraph twenty three
proud, congratulations
paragraph twenty four
"He looked radiant. For once,
he was proud of me"
Note the implicit meaning behind
the short phrase when referring to
her father, pride, which hints that he
was sparing in his praise of her
exuding, giving out, projecting
affections, warmth, love, joy
different moment of elation, optimism, confidence
- all produced by the warm congratulations of her
father, a life changing experience
worthy status, her writing reveals the importance
of social status and respectability in the society of
the time. Her father greatly appreciates the
approval of a respected business collegue
paragraph twenty seven
her father doesn't like her
to boast, he likes modesty