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Editing vs Revision

• Editing
• Is for sentences

Editing vs Revision

• Editing
• Is for sentences, it is use for problems with spelling, punctuation marks or word choice
• it removes uneeded words or sentences
• The editor looks for the mistakes and fixes them
• it changes the sentences or word to placement
• Revision
• it has the strengths and weaknesses, arguments, focus and organization, support, and voice
• purpose or revision is to ask questions, expanding ideas and challenging arguments which require discussion between the writer and the reader
• questions and making observations allow the persons to hold separate and valid opinions. The purpose of discussion is to expand ideas clarify
• makes counterarguments to move or delete entire paragraphs or reduce ideas, rewrite vague or confusing text, and add existing paragraphs.