Commas, Capitalization, and Numbers

After being lost in the cave for 6 days, the hiker cut off his own arm like a boss.

After being lost in the cave for six days, the hiker cut off his own arm, like a boss.

Despite the fact that he was warned not to run in the heat, Mike went out to the track at twelve and almost passed out.

Despite the fact that he was warned not to run in the heat Mike went out to the track at twelve and almost passed out.

Although she is forty years old, Mary still likes to watch cartoons.

Although she is 40 years old, Mary still likes to watch cartoons.

4. When the storm hit the Atlantic coast residents were told to evacuate their homes and run for the hills.

4. When the storm hit the Atlantic coast, residents were told to evacuate their homes and run for the hills.

5. Because they raised our premium, we can no longer afford our health insurance; it costs 500$ a month.

5. Because they raised our premium, we can no longer afford our health insurance; it costs five hundred dollars a month.

6. Walking on myrtle beach, Tom and Cindy had an excellent view of the sunset.

6. Walking on Myrtle Beach, Tom and Cindy had an excellent view of the sunset.

7. After watching the documentary on the many species that are facing extinction, Sara joined Greenpeace.

7. After watching the documentary on the many species that are facing extinction, Sara joined greenpeace.