Evaluation of Attempt Two

Attempt Two

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Evaluation

For our second attempt, we managed to collate enough content whilst building suspense however, it did not show professionalism which meant that it didn't show a high quality production. Whilst editing the footage, we came across a few flaws in it such as reflections being shown before someone is supposed to enter as well as the fact that the mise en scene isn't very strong. Therefore this meant that the narrative of the film became weak because the actors weren't very believable such as the age of the actor and the age the character should be. 

This time we used stronger actors who were interested and willing to portray our narrative which meant that the storyline was clear however, the mise en scene is rather weak which brings the film down because it's not believable to the audience. This means that we either need to change the storyline of the film because the actors worked well and they complimented the narrative or we change some of the actors again to make it show a sense of realism. Although, with these actors we managed to create enough content to portray our narrative meaning we were able to collate the 2 minutes of footage that is required, yet there is still the issue of the believability of the characters. 

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