Effect of language in Redskins attack p33-35

Effect of language in Redskins attack p33-35

1. We waited and waited...

2. We waited until...

   • Repetition of waited, emphasis is on waiting so suspense created

3. Even then we waited...

4. I saw sweating faces...

   • Repetition of sweat suggests fear is oozing out of them

5. Our faces dripped sweat...

6. Roosters sprawled

   • sprawled suggests there are thrown around everywhere

7. its belly ripped open...

   • ripped suggests violence, energy

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