2081527
Description
Mind Map by sophieantonelli, updated more than 1 year ago
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Created by sophieantonelli
about 9 years ago
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Feedback for video
- Material appropriate for the target
audience and task
- WWW
- The cross cutting
and contrast
between story
lines was good
- The cross cutting
and contrast
between story
lines was good
- EBI
- Think how to set the
scene could be a better
idea to get rid of the
unnecessary parts and
have the chasing scene as
the starting scene
- Think how to set the
scene could be a better
idea to get rid of the
unnecessary parts and
have the chasing scene as
the starting scene
- WWW
- Using titles appropriately according to institutional
conventions
- The positioning of the font was
good the way it was placed on
buildings
- WWW
- EBI
- The font doesn't
really match the
genre the font
could be more bold
and masculine to
convey a action
film
- The font doesn't
really match the
genre the font
could be more bold
and masculine to
convey a action
film
- The positioning of the font was
good the way it was placed on
buildings
- using sound with images &
editing appropriately for the
task set
- EBI
- put the volume down
also compare sound
from other films similar
then add bits if needs
- put the volume down
also compare sound
from other films similar
then add bits if needs
- WWW
- There was fast past music
with the chase and the
music matched with the
visuals
- EBI
- Shooting material appropriate
including controlled use of
camera, attention to framing,
variety of shot distance and
mise-en-scene
- WWW
- Good use of props
especially the golf club fits
with genre. Also good shot
of character being
dragged the framing was
good and mise-en-scene
- Good use of props
especially the golf club fits
with genre. Also good shot
of character being
dragged the framing was
good and mise-en-scene
- EBI
- Do more close-up shots epically when
the chase in going on so audience can see
facial expressions of the characters
- Do more close-up shots epically when
the chase in going on so audience can see
facial expressions of the characters
- WWW
- Use editing so that
meaning is apparent
to the viewer&
appropriate use of
shot transitions and
other effects
- www
- Good continuity cross
cutting was good as it
simultaneously creates
binary opposition
- Good continuity cross
cutting was good as it
simultaneously creates
binary opposition
- EBI
- The bit where the character got hit
make it look more realistic as it
doesn't seem as though he's got hit
- The bit where the character got hit
make it look more realistic as it
doesn't seem as though he's got hit
- www
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