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GCSE english Note on example letter, created by annie Beckh on 29/05/2013.
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7 crees meadow windleshamsurrey gu20 6qa

29.5.1312 school roadsunnighillberkshiresl5 5fr

Dear Mr.FrownI am sad to imform you that i am un-impressed with your poor schooling displayed by one of your imployees, Mrs.Green. My youngst daughter Harper Hills ,age 7, and my son Brooklyn Hills, age 13, are both taught by her, brooklyn three times a week for geography and Harper twice a week for creative writting lessons. I also have spoken to a few friends of mine about this problem and believe they feel the same way. One of the many appaling things that this teacher does in her classes is sit and shout at the puplis the second they walk in the door for no good reason, this i believe can cause self-esteem issues with the particular subject and as both my children state the subject that they used to like they now dread purley because of this teacher. Another problem with the children not looking forward to the lessons is that they are less likley to work hard and achieve in Mrs.greens lessons. Of course I do not want my children failing in any of their subjects, but some subjects they may not be any good at and we cannot avoid them not doing well, but Brooklyn and Harper are both good at Geography and Creative writting so i must complain that this teacher you have empoyed is not helping my children be the best they can be which is in your schools mission statment. I quote " we The Pupils and Teachers of the Villy Satart school hearby promise to do our best in TEACHING, learning, CARING FOR OUR PUPILS and carers" It seems to me that the children are doing their bit but Mrs.Green is not doing hers. My other two children who have been through your school had Mrs.Green for a few lessons they do not know Mrs.Green well but they agrree with their siblings, they also commented on cursing at the children, tearing up their work for no reason, threats to the children, eating in their classes and a list of many other things. A few of these things havent happened to Brooklyn and Harper but they agree that they sound like the kind of thing that she would do. I must say Mr.Frown that this is such a let down of your school, i have sent all four of my children through your otherwise outstanding school without a single problem that i can remember, i am warning you that there will soon be many other complaints unless this problem is sorted.Yours sincerley Ruby Hills

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