Karteikarten
Bayonet Charge
Karten in diesem Stapel (10)
- 1Repetition'raw/in raw-seamed hot khaki'
'sweat'/'sweating' -
attention to different emotions
'runs' ' running' 'footfalls' - focus of feet - 2Images'yellow hare . . like a flame'
'cold clockwork of the stars and the nations'
Evolution? creation? - 3PunctuationDashes to control rhythm and convey emotion of hesitations. Enjambments emphasis key words e.g 'mouth wide/open silent'
- 4Other FeaturesList ' King, honour, human dignity, ectcetera' - order of concepts war destroys
- 5Bayonet ChargeWW1 OR WW2 and others
- 6FocusSoldiers feelings in WW1 - emotions of combat ( see Owen )
- 7FormFree verse, 3 stanzas
- 8VoiceA commentary, Compassionate but quite cold
- 9Structure-Soldier sets off across a field towards a hedge
-Almost stops but focus is now his running
-Image of hare/his own fears - 10Sound EffectsLonger lines emphasising hard work,
L5, 'smacking'
L15, 'shot-slashed'
L22, 'crackling'
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- English Karteikarten am Bayonet Charge, erstellt von JosephBailey am 21/05/2013.
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