Organization

Organization

1. Attention to paragraph & sequence of sentences

   • Paragraphs need to be short
     • Focus on one idea to contrast or to compare
     • Provide evidence of the two cases
   • INTRODUCTORY SENTENCE: Both Vargas and Peron implemented social policies that looked for the improvement of worker's living standards. Both regimes did this by increasing salaries, paid vacations and creating summer houses for the workers to go on to. This can be seen in the fact that Brazil created....laws ....Similarly, J.D.P implemented the social reform code... Both regimes show the features of a populist style of government because they sought to create laws that directly
   • INTRODUCTION IS COMPLKETELY RELEVANT TO THE QUESTION: SOCIAL CONTEXT FOR THE REGIME OF THESE LEADERS AND STATE THE PURPOSE OF YOUR TEXT CONCLUSION=ADDITION OF ALL PARTIAL CONCLUSIONS, CHANGE THE WORDING/CHANGE THE PHRASING

2. EVIDENCES

   • To support arguments
   • IRRELEVANT
   • INACCURATE

3. GRAMMAR