Descriptive Piece - Prison

Descriptive Piece - Prison

1. Use a Simile

   • Great stone blocks, set in to a solid wall, like boulders in frozen a black sea.

2. Describe the 5 senses

   • sound
   • sight
   • touch
   • taste
   • smell

3. Leave the end of the description on a cliff hanger

   • It was time to escape into endless freedom

4. smell of burning flesh fills the halls and proves to everyone that there will be no escape

5. The feeling/atmosphere of the place

6. Prison Cell Door

   • Sound of the door closing - "The metal door clangs shut, followed by the sound of keys jingling in the lock"

7. Repertion

   • Another prisoner, another day

8. Sound of the Lights

   • Fluorescent lights hum and buzz overhead

9. What you can see when you are inside your cell

   • Sat in the corner of the chilled room, I can see the sharp corners at each edge of the room.

10. Uses of Complex Sentence

    • The brass handle protruding from the door, dirted from the many futile attempts to turn it and the key hole wide and round, an entrance to another world, teasing me.