English 4

Assignment four: Coherence – connecting ideas in research writing

Topic sentence 1 (level 1)

Society is in constant change and new students will need different skills, abilities and knowledge to face the new challenges that are coming.

Supporting idea topic 1 (level 4)

For all these reasons, it is important that students start with entrepreneur projects and increase their interest in starting their own businesses.

Topic sentence 3 (level 2)

The aim of an ongoing research by Begoña Ortiz, teacher at Rinman High School of Technologies, Eskilstuna, Sweden is to investigate the relationship between the impact of the entrepreneur projects at the high-school and the interest of the students in starting their own businesses by measuring the number of students who manage an own enterprise at the high-school and questionnaires that show the attitude and opinion of the students in this topic.

Supporting idea topic 1 (level 1)

If we want to have successful students we have to start preparing them for their professional future as well as their future as citizens.

Topic sentence 2 (level 2)

Nowadays entrepreneurs account for 80% of innovation and development of society.

Supporting idea topic 2 (level 2)

In addition, small and medium-sized enterprises (enterprises with less than 250 workers) represent 99% of all businesses in the EU.

Supporting idea topic 1 (level 1)

With innovation and development all of us will be able to face the future challenges with better prospects.

Supporting idea topic 1 (level 2)

This in turn leads to entrepreneurs contributing greatly to social development through multiple job opportunities, growth and even solving social problems.

In these two last sentences we see the same topic: society development.

Supporting idea topic 1 (level 3)

Entrepreneurship is a key element in the modern market economy.