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Mind Map by sianhorrigan, updated more than 1 year ago
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Created by sianhorrigan
about 9 years ago
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What I did with the
feedback that I recieved
- Positives
- The majority of my comments were
extremely positive making me positive
about the task I had created
- The feedback I received from the
audiences was very helpful for improving
my pieces of work as I could see from an
outsiders view if my concepts worked and
what could be changed or improved
- The best feedback I received was that the style of
my video went with the song choice as I wanted the
black and white to show the negativity of the story
line so I am glad my audience recognised this.
- I asked if it compared to real life
music videos and all of my feedback
stated it did. This pleasing as it
meant that I had followed typical
conventions of the industry in my
tasks.
- The majority of my comments were
extremely positive making me positive
about the task I had created
- Negatives
- Too much
black and
white
- KEPT: Some of the comments
stated that I used too much
black and white however I
decided not to change this
aspect of my video. The
reason for this is that I
thought it was effective in
portraying the negative story
behind my video. Also through
my research many artist had
used this effect in the same
way I wished to use e.g 'Ed
Sheeran - A team' therefore I
believe that this effect worked
well.
- KEPT: Some of the comments
stated that I used too much
black and white however I
decided not to change this
aspect of my video. The
reason for this is that I
thought it was effective in
portraying the negative story
behind my video. Also through
my research many artist had
used this effect in the same
way I wished to use e.g 'Ed
Sheeran - A team' therefore I
believe that this effect worked
well.
- Shots of
performance too
long in the middle
- CHANGED: This comment helped me as it meant
that I knew that I should include some more
shots so that the audience do not begin to get
bored because just watching a performance. To
do this I decided to record some more
monologues in order to break up the
performance aspect also so that I was not
repeating the same performance shots too
much. Most of the feedback I received
highlighted this issue which made it more
important for me to change it.
- CHANGED: This comment helped me as it meant
that I knew that I should include some more
shots so that the audience do not begin to get
bored because just watching a performance. To
do this I decided to record some more
monologues in order to break up the
performance aspect also so that I was not
repeating the same performance shots too
much. Most of the feedback I received
highlighted this issue which made it more
important for me to change it.
- Lip shot blurry
- CHANGED: I liked the shot I used of
my artists lips therefore I rerecorded
the extreme close up. The original
was blurred due to an unsteady had
therefore I used a tripod in order to
film the shot improving the quality
making it look much more
professional.
- CHANGED: I liked the shot I used of
my artists lips therefore I rerecorded
the extreme close up. The original
was blurred due to an unsteady had
therefore I used a tripod in order to
film the shot improving the quality
making it look much more
professional.
- Use Template for Digipak
- CHANGED: Originally I
didn't piece together
my digipak and left
each page separate.
However, my feedback
highlighted that the
audience didn't see it
as one complete piece
and were confused as
to which pages went
where. I changed this
for this reason and also
so it looks more
professional.
- CHANGED: Originally I
didn't piece together
my digipak and left
each page separate.
However, my feedback
highlighted that the
audience didn't see it
as one complete piece
and were confused as
to which pages went
where. I changed this
for this reason and also
so it looks more
professional.
- Too much
black and
white
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