Studied Poetry - Relationships

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The Manhunt - Simon Armitage (contemporary poetry)

The Title: Manhunt suggests someone who is missing or escaped. The word “hunt"

suggests an effort, attempt to find them.

Context

Simon Armitage was born in 1963 in West Yorkshire, where he still lives. He

studied Geography at Portsmouth University and completed an MA at Manchester,

where he wrote his dissertation on the effects of television violence on young

offenders. Afterwards he worked as a probation officer, a job which influenced

many of the poems in his first collection, Zoom! (1989).

His poetry demonstrates a strong

concern for social issues, as well as drawing on his Yorkshire roots. Armitage

is often noted for his "ear" - holding a strong sense of

rhythm and metre.

Armitage is not only a poet: as well

as publishing 15 collections of poetry, he has written for film, television and

radio, completed two novels as well as non-fiction books, and writes the lyrics

for his band The Scaremongers. He has also written translations of the Middle

English tale of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight and

Homer's Odyssey.

Simon Armitage uses colloquial (everyday, informal) language and autobiographical

material. He has worked on several television programmes including a

documentary on permanently injured soldiers and their lives. This poem was

first broadcast as part of that documentary.

Subject

The Manhunt is written from the perspective of the

wife of a soldier who has sustained serious injuries at war and has returned

home. The poem explores the physical and mental effects of living with injuries

sustained when on active service in the armed forces.

Structure and

language

Structure

The poem is made up of a series of couplets,

mostly unrhymed. This creates a sense of fragmentation, which

matches the feelings of the soldier's wife as she seeks to understand the man

her husband has become.

The poem describes the phases of a

wife's search for answers from her injured husband who has recently returned

from a war zone. The poem ends when the search is brought to a close.

Language

The title puns on the

idea of the 'manhunt', meaning literally a hunt to capture a man, often a

criminal. Here the wife's search is for the husband she knew so well but who

seems lost to her, metaphorically, after his experiences at

war.

Many of the first lines of the

couplets have prominent verbs, reflecting the activities of the wife as she

conducts her “search". Words and phrases like "explore", "handle

and hold”,” mind and attend" are all references to careful treatment

of her husband's injured body, as well as suggesting her patient care for his

mental state.

The speaker refers to parts of the

husband's body metaphorically, comparing them to inanimate objects

rather than to living things. His jaw is a "blown hinge",

suggesting that he is no longer open to her, perhaps unable to talk of his

feelings and experiences. His collar bone is "damaged,

porcelain", a metaphor [metaphor: An

expression used to describe and/or compare a subject/action/person by the way

it feels or what it resembles - e.g. 'sea of troubles', and 'drowning in debt'

are metaphors.] that brings to mind something hard but also easily

chipped and cold, a reminder of the "frozen river which ran through

his face".

There are lots of sensual, loving

verbs in the poem, reflecting the intimacy of husband and wife, and keen

devotion from the wife hoping to heal her husband. The wife says that she is

able to "climb the rungs of his broken ribs", a closely observed

detail of her hands exploring the altered body of her husband. The

idea of the ladder is reflective of the effort involved in the wife's gradual

search for answers.

Attitudes, themes

and ideas

The Manhunt is about the patience and care of love.

The wife in the poem is methodical and thorough in her search, exploring her

husband's injured body with love and care.

The poem also explores the cost

of war on those serving in the armed forces. The man has a "grazed

heart", perhaps literally from an injury caused by "the metal

beneath his chest", but also metaphorically. He is unable to connect with

his wife, unwilling to speak of his experiences, and so their loving

relationship is affected. The image of the metal bullet still inside him as a "foetus" suggests

that, like having a baby, the couple's relationship will be forever changed by

what he has gone through.

Lines 23 and 24 present the metaphor

of "a sweating, unexploded mine buried deep in his mind". The

source of the problem is not physical but mental, and threatens to cause

problems at any time. The importance of the wife's care and delicacy is

highlighted by her discovery of this problem.

The poem is not about judging the

rights and wrongs of war, but the impact of war on one particular relationship.

This is made clear in the final line of the poem: "Then, and only

then, did I come close". Her search is not fully successful, she only

comes "close", and only after she realises that her husband's

problems lie as much in memories of his experiences as they do in his physical

scars.

Comparison

In Paris with You

The male speaker in the poem In

Paris with You is unwilling to discuss his experiences of the past;

instead he is keen to focus on the present. The husband in The

Manhunt is similarly closed on the subject of the past.

The Farmer's Bride, To His Coy Mistress

The Manhunt is written from the perspective of a

woman exploring her feelings for her husband and their relationship.

Many of the other poems in this collection are from a male point of view,

such as The Farmer's Bride and To His Coy

Mistress.

Sample question

In your exam you will be asked to

compare a certain aspect of one poem with another. In order to do this, we need

to get to know this poem a bit better by considering one of its main aspects.

What follows is a sample question

which concentrates on one feature of the poem and an answer (not necessarily

complete!) to the question.

Question

Write about the presentation of

relationships in The Manhunt and To His Coy Mistress.

Answer

Points you could make:

The Manhunt includes detailed and closely

observed references to the body of a loved one, reflective of the

closeness of the relationship.

In To His Coy Mistress there

are similar images, yet these represent the fantasy of the male speaker as

he tries to convince his mistress to have sex with him.

To His Coy Mistress balances the ideal relationship

with that which is possible given the time available.

Similarly, The Manhunt explores

the strength of a relationship that endures even in the

most difficult of circumstances.

The Manhunt has a female speaker who is

determined to search for the man she feels she lost to war. She wants to

understand her husband's feelings and so is searching his body for clues.

To His Coy Mistress has a male speaker who is similarly

determined. However, he feels that time will prevent his relationship

flourishing if his mistress does not act with more urgency.

the manhunt