1_Essays - created from Mind Map

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Format

Prompt

Who

Ideas and Anaylaze

Creating suspense in a story

5 paragraphs

Intro

Evidence Based

4-6 sentences

Body

6-9 sentences

Conclusion

3-5 Sentences

thesis

Topic Sentence

Argument

Example

Evidence

Anaylaze

What

Where

when

Why

How

explore, explain, support

Development And Support

Explain (support)the problem(development) of the story

Organization

The response has to be around the central idea, and has to make sense. Don't use alot of transitins but use transition devices for unrelated things

Language Use

Usage, punctuation, interfere, clarity, word choices

Put main idea readers care about in jeapordy

reader empathy, reader concern, impending danger and escalating tension.

Include more promises and less action

Give the main point some struggle so that it could connect to the story more

Get readers attention and make the following clear: 1) What your character desires (love, freedom, adventure, forgiveness, etc.); 2) what is keeping him from getting it; and 3) what terrible consequences will result if he doesn’t get it.

Suspense for danger: a threat for the climax, whether is it physical or mentally

Writers can also do this by creating romance or sex scenes in here

Suspense happens in between action scenes, and promises between something dreadful and its arrival

Keep every promise you made

Needs action , apprehension, and promises to happen

Anticipation must be made , keep your promise

If you want alot of suspense, make the promise big or break promises by fullfilling them

Let the characters state their plans

Don´t waste your time giving lots of details