OCR Enlgish revison question 2B

OCR Enlgish revison question 2B

1. Question 2B

   • information
     • Third. comment on your evidence.
       • This is an overwhelming figure because...
       • The writer is trying to____shock/surprise/change our views/demonstrate....
       • this could make the reader feel__sympathy/frustration/guilt/fear/anxiety becauase.....
         • ..and link back to the question
     • second. Try to comment on 2-3 pieces of information. For each piece try to use the following
       • point sentence
         • we are also given an important statistic when the writer explains that....
         • another key fact is....
         • an important piece of information is....
     • First - read the question, make sure you understand what you are looking for
       • After this, start you answer, something like this
         • Or, One key piece of information used is....
         • The___article/leaflet___uses information words and phrases to____ convince /challenge/persuade/highlight____.......
   • create a new paragraph commenting on individual words
     • First.. Topic sentence
       • The writer also uses individual words for a specific effect to.....
       • Link back to the question.....
     • second. point sentence
       • one word which creates a___ atmosphere/tone/mood is "____"
       • The writer also deliberately includes the word "_____" towards the end of the text to make us feel......
     • Third... Comment on the effect
       • this word is____positive/negative/uplifting/warm/harsh. This makes the reader feel __sympathy/empathy/isolation/confusion because....
       • This word has been included to___exaggerate/question/argue/challenge...
       • comment on language features if you can

2. Finally, write a paragraph commenting on phrases

   • First.. Topic sentence
     • finally, a wide range of phrases are used to show us that....(key words from question)
   • Second. point/evidence
     • a memorable phrase used it "___"
     • another important phrase the writer has included is "______"
     • a phrase which may provoke a different response is "___"
   • Third... then comment on your evidence
     • how does it make us feel?
     • what is the emotion?
     • why might it be surprising or persuasive
     • how does that phrase have a different effect to the other phases you have mentioned
     • try to make slightly different comments if you can.
     • Zoom in on language features and comment on them if possible